Death Penalty Stance revision on uploaded essay

Question

Hello sir/maam,
I have a previous essay with a stance on the death penalty uploaded here for your review. I would like further elaboration on the subject to the best of your ability. If you can make it better then that's what I'm looking for. Thank you

Criteria
Paper correctly follows the Classical Argument pattern of organization
Introduction is engaging and piques interest; only necessary background information is provided
Thesis statement takes a clear, focused position and is the last sentence of the introduction
Reasons are clearly stated in a forecast
Reasons are well supported with appropriate and sufficient evidence; reasons are discussed in the proper order (same as stated in forecast)
Objection is clearly stated; rebuttal effectively responds
Conclusion provides a strong ending
At least four sources are used in references; all sources are properly formatted; all cited sources are included
Four different sources are cited in the paper; all in-text citations are formatted correctly
Writing is well organized and free of grammar and punctuation errors; assignment is within the word range and formatted correctly