Nutrition, Exercise, and Health
There is a revised paper 3 document. You should revise and adding on this assignment. Also, there are some comment in the paper and other file about professor comment. Writer should revise and adding base on the file. Also, Help me add a conclusion for my paper.
Generally, I think my paper lack some specific case study and my paper is generally talking. Therefore, writer should do more about case study about food pyramid about parents how to help children have a good eating behavior. And do another case study about school food policy and how can school improve children eating behavior by food policy. In the end help me to add a conclusion for whole project. You should also add two more source about the case study. There are all sources in the end of my paper I use and having link with them. If you can’t find, you could ask me to provide.
