Why does Socrates defend himself the way he does in The Apology? Provide a specific and focused thesis statement to make an argument about Socrates’ motivation. Some questions that you might consider include: What does the manner of his testimony reveal about the way he understands himself and his mission as a philosopher? What does this reveal about his attitude towards life and death? How does he respond to those who think he is being foolish and throwing his life away?
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Your paper draws attention to many relevant aspects of Plato’s Apology.
When you revise the paper, it will be important to address a few things that prevent the paper form succeeding. My first concern is that you do not have a thesis statement in the paper and you never specify what paper topic your are answering. This made it difficult for me to understand what you were trying to say in the paper. Choose a clear and focused thesis statement that best makes sense of why Socrates defends himself as he does in the Apology (if that is the question you are trying to answer here).
Your body paragraphs need to elaborate and defend your thesis, and each paragraph should have multiple quotations form the text that support the claims you are making. You never quote from Plato’s texts in this paper, and you seem to be drawing from sources outside of our textbook. Only use texts that were assigned in class to write this paper.
It would be a good idea to have a friend proofread the paper for you or to see someone in the writing center. Your language was often a bit unclear and featured several grammatical errors. This made it very difficult to understand what you were saying here. Working on your writing style with help from others will make your essay stronger. I am happy to help you with your revision as well.
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