Imagine that you are sitting down one-on-one with Student B. Also “pretend” that the content is OK (though it’s difficult to tell).
Focus on just ONE sentence-error that you see (it’s better if it’s an error repeated more than once) and describe in detail how you would explain to the student what is wrong with the sentence and how she/he can fix it. If this is a repeated error, it’s a good idea to use the first instance for explanation and then direct the student to the next one.
Try NOT to just write a long paragraph – break the lesson down into parts/manageable chunks. The goal is for the student to walk away knowing how to fix the error. You may of course, refer to any parts of the essay.
Remember for this assignment, your goal is not to merely identify the error but to explain to the student how/why it needs fixing. Perhaps it will help if you write this assignment in letter form so that you can visualize the student.
CAUTION!!! Imagine this is a 50 minute tutoring session. Of course you can’t help with all of the errors in this essay as our resident tutors in this class can confirm.
CAUTION 1: Focus on just the grammar/sentences.
The attached file STUDENT 2
The level? We have been directed to move away from remedial writing courses and provide a once-size-fits-all approach, moving students through freshman composition in one semester. This class is called ENGWR 300/108 where we teach freshman composition and then try to help the lower level students move up and pass the ENGWR 300 class. Two-classes in one with 6 hours a week. This can be very challenging.
Your only goal is to help the student. To do this, you might want to begin with a positive statement. There is ALWAYS something positive you can say about students’ writing. Often, I use what many teachers call a “feedback sandwich” — a positive statement (or two), followed by constructive suggestions on areas for improvement and how to improve, and ending with another positive/encouraging comment.
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